Added: Nov 18, 2008
From: ObsessedJonasWritter
Duration: 0:26
(this chapter may not have been as good as the original chapter I wrote. Onetruemedia is out to get me and my stories and made the upload an error! So I had to re-type this whole thing! Curse you Onetruemedia! Wow, that was really unChristian of me. Oh, well)Recap: Nick and Mim are a couple. Kevin and Deanna are going out to dinner.Kevin's POVSHE SAID YES!!! She wrote her number down on my arm, and left. Melanie and Nick came over. "What's that on your arm?" Nick said, lifting it up. They look at the number, and smile. "Boy, you bounce back fast!" Melanie says. She glances at the number again and her expression becomes shocked! Her jaw dropped as she said, "I know that number! Um...Deanna!" " How do you know her?" I ask. "She used to be my babysitter. She let me get away with eating all the sweets I could fit in my mouth!" she says, smiling. "Well, let's get you home." Nick says. We take one step out of the building. We notice a man in a giant Treecko suit. [bet u didn't see that coming! I warned you earlier about a giant Poke'mon suit! Mwahahahaha Plus, I love Treecko the best! lol] We all slowly take steps away from the grown man. We get to the car. "That was odd." I say. They agree. I look back at the man, and he's smiling at me, flirtatiously. "Let's get out of here!!!" I say, and quickly turn the car on.Melanie's POVOk, we get to my house soon. Nick and I get out as he walks me to my door. We get there. "I had a lot of fun. Thanks." I say, smiling. He smiles back and says, "My pleasure. I'll see you later." We start to lean in. Our lips gently touch. The door flies open and someone clears their throat. I look over and see Brandon smiling. "Brandon!" I whine. "You gonna introduce me?" he asks. "I wasn't planning on it. (he glares at me) Ugh, fine. Brandon, this is my boyfriend Nick. Nick, this is my brother Brandon. He can get on my last nerve, but I love him!" I say. They shake hands. "Anything, oh, I don't know, out of the ordinary happen on your date?" he asks, almost laughing. "You set that up, didn't you?" I ask. "I don't know what your talking about." he says, looking anywhere but my eyes. "I'll see you later, Nick." I say. He smiles and kissed my cheek. He ran back to the car and they left. I went inside, only thinking of that kiss. How much sparks I felt, how warm his lips were. I'll tell you guys more stuff in this roller coaster romance later! Bye! xoxoMELANIExoxo_____________________________________Haha. I told you about those Poke'mon suits! Well, Brandon sure seem like he's a prankster! And protective at that. I wonder who Melanie is going to pick! When she has to pick. Ryan, or Nick? How will Kevin's date go? Will that gay guy in the poke'mon suit find Kevin again? I don't know, it's possible!
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Rating: 5.00 (2 ratings) Views: 79 Comments: 4
ObsessedJonasWritter Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - lol, thanks. But I kinda made this one more comedy than romance than the original. Haha. But it still works great!
Mitrpr1 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - Hahaha, that's so true!
kayla6408 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - LOL GIANT POKEMON!good chapterrrMORE!
Mitrpr1 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - Hahahaha, this was funny! Can't wait for more! Oh, nd I feel bad for you on having to type it all up all over again.